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Layout
English subject page
-The layout is good
-The texts are clear to see
-Can maybe add some more details to explain more, not only just the fiction, nonfiction, poetry, and drama
-Some spellings are wrong, so double check your articles and fix the spellings
-The images are not related to the articles and the subject
by my parents
Social Studies
-The articles are good
-The images are related
-Can have more details explaining what students are learning
-Fix the grammar
by my parents
-The article are good
-Each paragraph and picture should have more space
-Each paragraph should have a title
-There are too many words in each paragraph, which need to be separated
-It needs more images that is about social studies
by Kingsley Wu
Social Studies page feedback by Daniel Zhang
Too dark
one image is low quality
images are related or rotated
No icons and graphics
They are random
Three fonts are used not two
readable
spacing is consistent
used quite well left-aligned
used simple
visual slow is inconsistent
title is a title
One article
introduction is clear and some unclear
Doesn't show concepts
Topics aren't clear t00
Shows importance
Accurate
Unexplainable
One recent examples
no developments
Summary is basic, not a bad thing, shows importance
Tone is formal, vocabularies are simple
1/2 transition words
no transition words
pretty half and half
English First People Subject Page Feedback by Brian
-colour consistent
-images quality good and alt text needs improvement
-aligned
-layout and composition whiteout good
-easier read fonts
-appropriate line length
-run on sentences
-no bullet points
-not too clear with delivering messages
--The title is clear and relevant
-the introduction lacks clarity
-provides clear examples and future ...
-lacks details
-talks about importance
-informative
-engaging not boring
-easy to read
-good flow
-precise
-understanding to readers
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